The Girl Aviators and the Phantom Airship — Text and Context
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THE GOLDEN BUTTERFLY.
"Roy! Roy! where are you?"
Peggy Prescott came flying down the red-brick path, a rustling newspaper clutched in her hand.
"Here I am, sis,--what's up?"
The door of a long, low shed at the farther end of the old-fashioned garden opened as a clattering sound of hammering abruptly ceased. Roy Prescott, a wavy-haired, blue-eyed lad of seventeen, or thereabouts, stood in the portal. He looked very business-like in his khaki trousers, blue shirt and rolled up sleeves. In his hand was a shiny hammer.
Peggy, quite regardless of a big, black smudge on her brother's face, threw her arms around his neck in one of her "bear hugs," while Roy, boy-like, wriggled in her clasp as best he could.
"Now, just look here," cried Peggy, quite out of breath with her own vehemence. She flourished the paper under his nose and, imitating the traditional voice of a town crier, announced:
"Hear ye! Hear ye! Hear ye! Roy Prescott or any of the ambitious aviators--now is your chance! Great news from the front! Third and last call!"
"You've got auctioneering, the Supreme Court and war times, mixed up a bit, haven't you?" asked Roy with masculine condescension, but gazing fondly at his vivacious sister nevertheless.
Peggy made a little face and then thrust forth the paper for his examination.
"Read that, you unenthusiastic person," she demanded, "and then tell me if you don't think that Miss Margaret Prescott has good reason to feel somewhat more enthusiastic than comports with her usual dignity and well-known icy reserve--ahem!"
"Good gracious, sis!" exclaimed the boy, as he scanned the news-sheet, "why this is just what we were wishing for, isn't it? It's our chance if we can only grasp it and make good."
"We can! We will!" exclaimed Peggy, striking an attitude and holding one hand above her glossy head. "Read it out, Roy, so that Monsieur Bleriot can hear it."
M. Bleriot, a French bull-dog, who had dignifiedly followed Peggy's mad career down the path, gazed up appreciatively, as Roy read out:
"Big Chance for Sky Boys!
"Ironmaster Higgins of Acatonick Offers Ten Thousand Dollars In Prizes for Flights and Planes."
"Ten thousand dollars, just think!" cried Peggy, clasping her hands one minute and the next stooping to caress M. Bleriot. "Oh, Roy! Do you think we could?"
"Could what? you indefinite person?" parried Roy, although his eyes were dancing and he knew well enough what his vivacious sister was driving at.
"Could win that ten thousand dollars, of course, you goose."
"It's not all offered in a lump sum," he rejoined. "Listen; there is a first prize of five thousand dollars for the boy under eighteen who makes the longest sustained flight in a plane of his own construction--with the exception of the engine, that is; and here's another of two thousand five hundred dollars to the glider making the best and longest sustained flight, and another of one thousand five hundred to the boy flying the most carefully constructed machine and the one bearing the most ingenious devices for perfecting the art of flying and--and--oh listen, Peggy!"
"I am--oh, I am!" breathed Peggy with half assumed breathlessness.
"There's a prize offered for girls!"
"Yes. Now don't say any more that girls are downtrodden and neglected by the bright minds of the day. Here it is, all in black and white, a prize of a whole thousand to the young lady who makes a successful flight. There, what do you think of that?"
"That Mr. Higgins is a mean old thing," pouted Peggy, "five thousand dollars to the successful boy and only one thousand to the successful girl. It's discrimination, that's what it is. Don't you read every day in the papers about girls and women making almost as good flights as the men? Didn't a--a Mademoiselle somebody-or-other make a flight round the bell tower at Bruges the other day, and hasn't Col. Roosevelt's daughter been up in one, and isn't there a regular school for women fliers at Washington, and--and----?"
"Didn't the suffragettes promise to drop 'Votes for Women' placards from the air upon the devoted heads of the British Parliament, you up to date young person?" finished Roy, teasingly.
Peggy made a dash for him but the boy dodged into the shed, closely followed by his sister.
From its opening line—'Roy! Roy! where are you?'—Margaret Burnham's The Girl Aviators and the Phantom Airship establishes a breathless, colloquial voice that drives the narrative forward. The prose is packed with exclamation points, rapid-fire dialogue, and physical action: Peggy 'comes flying down the red-brick path,' throws 'bear hugs,' and flourishes newspapers. This energetic style suits a story centered on a ten-thousand-dollar aviation prize and a mysterious airship, but it also shapes how technical information is delivered. Roy's explanations of aeroplane construction and fuel logistics are woven into banter, never pausing the momentum. The result is a text that feels less like a manual and more like a spoken adventure, where even a French bulldog named M. Bleriot gets a speaking part in the scene.
Voice and Colloquial Rhythm
Burnham's dialogue is the engine of the novel. Characters interrupt each other, finish sentences with exclamations, and shift tone mid-speech. Peggy's mock town-crier announcement—'Hear ye! Hear ye! Hear ye!'—is immediately undercut by Roy's teasing: 'You've got auctioneering, the Supreme Court and war times, mixed up a bit.' This back-and-forth creates a natural, unpretentious rhythm. The narrator also slips into colloquial asides, like 'boy-like, wriggled in her clasp as best he could,' which keeps the point of view close to the characters. Even technical passages are filtered through this voice: Roy explains the prize structure not in a block of exposition but in a conversational exchange. The effect is a story that feels told aloud, with the reader placed as an eavesdropper on the Prescott siblings' banter.
Pace and the Mechanics of Suspense
The narrative alternates between bursts of action and moments of stalled progress, creating a rhythm of anticipation. Early chapters move quickly: the newspaper announcement, the race to the shed, the immediate planning. But once the plot introduces the 'Phantom Airship' and the rival Harding Aeroplane Company, the pace slows to accommodate secrecy and surveillance. Roy and Peggy spend time 'examining the hut' and debating 'tangled ends left ravelled.' Burnham uses these lulls to build mystery—the locked shed, the red-nosed watchman, the cryptic boxes delivered at night. The aeroplane itself, the Golden Butterfly, becomes a symbol of both speed and patience: it must be fueled, repaired, and flown at the right moment. This push-and-pull between haste and delay mirrors the characters' own tension between youthful impatience and the need for careful planning.
Setting as a Character in the Air
Burnham's settings are sketched with quick, sensory details that reinforce the story's tone. The 'old-fashioned garden' and 'red-brick path' of the Prescott home give way to the 'flat, smooth field of some fifty acres' at Acatonick, dotted with 'green-painted sheds known as the hangars.' The contrast between domestic comfort and the open, competitive airfield is sharp. But the most vivid setting is the air itself: flight is described in terms of motion and light, not altitude or mechanics. When the Golden Butterfly 'rose' and 'winged her way back,' the prose focuses on the act of rising, not the view. The island where the characters find fuel is 'queer' and empty, a stage for discovery rather than a place. These settings are functional—they exist to enable action—but Burnham gives them just enough texture to feel real without slowing the narrative.
Readers should pay attention to how Burnham balances technical jargon with natural speech. The novel is not a technical manual, but it does expect its audience to follow discussions of 'fly wheels,' 'biplane models,' and 'sustained flight' without hand-holding. The pleasure lies in the contrast: the characters are both enthusiastic amateurs and surprisingly competent builders. The editorial note above highlights the narrative voice and pacing, but the book also rewards attention to its period details—the role of newspapers, the culture of prize competitions, and the casual inclusion of a French bulldog as a family member. Approach it as a fast-moving adventure that happens to be about aeroplanes, not as a history lesson.
I keep thinking about that brisk, colloquial energy in The Girl Aviators—how the technical details never slowed the feeling of flight. It reminded me of a quieter kind of persistence I found later, in Patty's Success — Inside the Classic, where steady work hums beneath the surface of friendship. Some stories stay because they felt alive, not because they tried hard.
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